moon jumper

This thread is for people who need a title and can't think of one, needs inspiration, or anything else that comes up in the writing process. Here's the stuff you ...

Alright I found this somewhere, but can't remember. BUT, it is by this guy named Randy Ingermanson, so I'm just paraphrasing it. Step 1) One sentence summary. Shorter is better ...

At my school, they made us write. I never liked it until my friend - lets call her lemon(inside joke, I was lime)...but anyway - introduced me to HP fan ...

Alright, everyone needs two characters. You need to go to the discussion thread and claim spots there. Here are my next two characters: Name: Gavina Blythe Age: 19 Race: hawk ...

Reva pulled it back down. She had seen something in his hair. Reva felt around, and pulled her hand back quickly. They all saw her hand was bleeding. "You have ...

Alright then, the critique. 1) The Story First of all let me say that you have described everything very well. I couldn't find any grammatical errors of any sort, and ...

Okay guys, I think I've gone unofficially insane! For 2009, I'm going to TRY to post 2,009 reviews in honor of the new year! Think I'm crazy - just wait! ...

Reva She smiled, "I'd love to! When do we leave?" They all looked at her, "What?" she asked, "Ciru's right." Ciru laughed and asked her, "Why don't you get your ...

Check our Discussion Thread for important information! You need to claim a few things and read the info. ~jumper

Let me see, we have Petey, Andi, Toni, Allie, Stevey, Anne, and Emily. Only seven. Oh, and cat4prowl, you might want to invite a few friends. We've been trying to ...

Reva walked back to Ari as she mounted her white dragon. "How about you teach me some of those moves, and I'll teach you some of mine sometime?" Reva outreached ...

*Oh, it's on girl!* "Now that's unsportsmanlike, but I'm not much for rules myself," Reva took her legs and putting her feet underneath Ari's stomach, flung her into the air ...

Ari swung first. Reva easily dodged it. "I see you're still stiff." She laughed. "You wish." Ari swung at Reva's ankles. But when she looked up Reva wasn't there. "I'm ...

Alright here it goes. 1) Grammar Wow. The way you have this is very confusing. There are no sentences or capital letters where they should be. It's just like a ...

Alright I'm up for this! I'm going to do 101 reviews for the new year. (Hopefully), by midnight December 31, I'll be done! ^^